Small soldiers 1997 Adam Rifkin draft

this version of small soldiers was one of the scripts that was going to be the film

plot
the story of the script is a bit similar to the original however this film takes a new meets old approach to the film Alans family name is changed to noseberry and his father's name is Mel instead of Stewart who wants to live life in a very simple life before technology as they work in a farm they use oil lamps and candles for lighting at night but while we see they're lives we also get to see what's going on at marstech which has  gil.mars who over sees how the blech brigade and who enlists Larry and Erwin to release a toy line Erwin however created the commando elite and creates the gorgonites however Larry steals Erwin's idea of the commando elite but Erwin shows off archer to them explaining they have similar things as the commando elite have which gives the attention  of chip Braddock who try's to attack archer but Erwin pick him up before he could the two toy lines would go into production and sold at the same to see who would sell better  which while this is going on  Alan was out with  a friend named Marshall go to the mall Alan enters in a raffle while hanging out with Marshall Alan talks to charity however before anything happens a voice over the p.a calls for Alan telling him he won chip Braddock and archer this caused Alan to get very embarrassed and got the figures and hid them in his jacket so when he got home his parents didn't notice he took  archer out first and looked at him calling him a "ugly sob" which caused him to look at Alan which scared him a bit causing him to drop him he would hear his mom who need him to feed the pigs so he hid archer alan would do the chore unaware of this archer sneaks out of the pillow and would get attacked by chip which Alan sees the the silhouette of  the two in combat when he returned chip is missing a leg and throws his knife into Alan's ankle and dives out of the window and would hide alan would find archer in peiece and put him back together now that his enemy is gone archer makes Alan's home a "gorgonite castle"   charity family is not so different she still has her parents but instead of a little brother she has a grandmother charity also goes on a date with another boy but instead of brad she goes on a date with a guy named chuck and charity is still captured by the commandos but instead of her dolls named Gwendy's they are called Sindy dolls   which are also recruited into commando elites which they are then call zomsindys  however they try to make charity into a giant zomsindy but luckily Alan and the gorgonites stop them before they could and Alan and charity meet Larry and Erwin with Erwin wearing a box over his head because he hasn't been outside in 15 years they would learn the commandos did it as a decoy for the gorgonites to take over Alan's home and try to blow it up with a makeshift bomb with a commando who doubles as a bomb with Alan and charity families inside this causes to the gorgonites to feel sad as they lost they're "castle" but with some encouragement from Alan the gorgonites now want to take back they're home however when trying to close in scar puss and freakenstein are taken out by getting their main kill button hit but the humans are not safe either as  the box that Erwin gets set on  fire by the commandos throwing flaming golf balls but when the box comes off Erwin is happy to see outside again looking at the night sky with delight but while they are taking cover they call mars to help which he says he'll be there soon as possible and don't call the cops and the phone Larry was using to talk to him is destroyed but while they are covered the gorgonites start fighting back throwing make shift weapons being sticks made into sticks however eyeball head becomes a casualty getting his main kill button hit by  a golf ball which insaniac grabs one and kills a commando which the gorgonites start to throw golf balls back however during this insaniac is a casualty when archer finds him he takes his lasso  it with his longbow and gets upstairs and not get noticed by the commandos when he gets to the basement  he swings to the bomb with only two minutes left  chip try's to stop archer by grabbing his leg but luckily archer pops off his legs with his kill button which makes chip fall to hot coals with burns him to beyond recognition  with only a few seconds remaining archer presses his main kill button which his head pressing  the commandos main kill button stopped the bomb from blowing up with the parents fine and the commandos plan failed gil mars shows up controlling the remaining commandos with a remote and holding  both bags of gorgonites and commandos parts giving the commandos to Erwin and the gorgonites to Alan after they left Mel gave Alan archer's parts  after the whole thing that Alan lived through he set the gorgonites free

gorgonites

 * archer full name arch fiend
 * insaniac
 * freakenstein
 * scarpuss
 * warto
 * venomous maximus
 * and 13 unnamed gorgonites

commando's

 * chip braddock
 * buzz flattop
 * rock hardcliff
 * chase dragstrip
 * kip killcrazy
 * butch meathook

trivia

 * in the script there are some spelling mistakes like kumbaya is spelled "cum by ya"
 * it's reviled arch-fiend is archers full name
 * the only gorgonites who stay the same are archer, insaniac and freakenstein the commandos are a bit similar while they're last names are different being chip braddock, kip killcrazy while butch meathook stays the same